[wamdue]

(this is set in the same alt timeline as my unfinished (I will get around to it one day ) Daniel Robinson fic)

Date: 13th July 2010

setting: Sunnys bedroom at the Kennedy house.

Sunny is in bed, asleep when the clock changed from 06:59 to 07:00, and a piercing alarm rings out, Sunny turns over still asleep, and is woken as she falls out of bed. Sunny starts to pick herself up.

Sunny: god I wish that would not happen

Zeke (calls out from behind the wall between their rooms): you ok Sunny, you fall out of bed again?

Sunny shouts: yep

Sunny gets out and smashes the alarm clock till the piercing noise stopped, pulls on her dressing gown and starts to leave her room for the bathroom, only to see the door being shut, and hear the bathroom lock being enganged.

Sunny: Zeke is that you?
Zeke: sorry Sunny you snooze you loose
Sunny: yes well dont use up all of the hot water again
Zeke turning on the shower: ill try not to, but me & Daniel have got a big day at Lassisters today, I need to be at my best.

Sunny shivered, she did not like Daniel Robinson, he was all charm and no girl was off limits, he had even tried to hit on her once, Sunny had worried that she seemed like the kind of girl who was up for a one night stand, like her sister, but Zeke had reassured her that was not the case. Sunny smiled thinking of Zeke, he was good guy and whilst they had split up he had always been a friend to her.

Sunny started to move back towards her room, when she heard a noise from the main living area, she stopped for a moment then decided to be brave and carried on to investigative
Sunny (to herself): its probaly just Audrey, or Karl sleeping on the sofa after an argument with Susan, and its not like im getting in the shower anytime soon.

Sunny entered the living area, to see a figure sleeping on the sofa: Karl is that you she called out.

no answer, she moved close to the person, and saw a young woman sleeping her face towards the back, and covered in an expensive looking jacket. Sunny reached out and touched the coat.

The young woman woke with a shout, and fell off the sofa.

Zeke stepped out the shower, heard the shout: Sunny are you ok what was that.
Sunny in a shocked voice: its ok Zeke, its only my sister.

Sunny looked down at her sister: What are you doing here, how did you get in here.
Park Lee: relax sis, ive just come over to see you.

Zeke wearing only a towel came running into the room, his hair still with shampoo: Sunny you have a sister?

End of Part One

This post has been edited by wamdue: 14 July 2009 - 12:08 AM

[*Emily*]

That was awesome.
I loved the chemistry between Zeke and Sunny

[wamdue]

I was hoping people would notice the parallels in this story of when Sunny first entered the street, and the parallel between her & her sister, suggesting that maybe Park Lee is not as different from her as Sunny thinks she is.

by parallel I mean the falling out of the cab in her first episode, and falling out of bed, something that Park Lee does as well.

[amiebeth]

wamdue, on Jul 14 2009, 06:24 PM, said:

I was hoping people would notice the parallels in this story of when Sunny first entered the street, and the parallel between her & her sister, suggesting that maybe Park Lee is not as different from her as Sunny thinks she is.

by parallel I mean the falling out of the cab in her first episode, and falling out of bed, something that Park Lee does as well.

Ah, that is certainly an interesting idea. Like the story so far.

[wamdue]

I will try and write more on this, but I do want to focus on the differences in lives between two similar sisters, who dont really know each other.

[wamdue]

Part Two

setting: The Kennedy Lounge area

looking worried Sunny hurried over to Zeke, attempting to push him back into the hall way: just get back in the shower and dont tell anyone.

picking herself up off the floor, Park Lee: what are you ashamed of me sis?

Zeke took a good look at Park Lee, and is stunned, he manages to stammer: shes beautiful

Sunny looks annoyed at Zeke

Zeke hopeless backtracking: but not as sexy as her sister.

Sunny glares at Zeke

Zeke realising he should just leave, makes for the door: if you need me ill be in the shower.

Sunny shuts the door, and turns back to her sister: Park what are you doing here?

Park: hes a cutie where have you been hiding that one, are you to, you know

Sunny looking horrified: dont talk about Zeke like that

Park: I knew it you two totally are, my little sis finally gets a guy, never thought I would live to see it.

Sunny: and your such an expert, arnt you.

Park: well not to brag but I have had more than my share

Sunny: not on guys, on your own sister, or just being a sister

Park: ive always been your sister, you just never seemed interested.

Sunny: you stopped being my sister when you left, you walked out and left us, you left me.

Park: I had to, you know what mum & dad are like. *Park looks around* : Looks like you managed to leave them as well.

Sunny: im an exchange student, when you left mum & dad never spoke of you, to ashamed of you, they put all their time & energy into me, do you know what that kind or pressure is like?

Park: well yeah I do a bit

Sunny: no you dont, you live your life from one runway to the next wearing the latest clothes, an assistant to take care of all your needs, you have no idea what the real world is like.

Park: that is not what my life is like at all its alot of hard work

Sunny: yeah right, what are you even doing here anyway, fancy spending some time with the family you forgot about.

Park said nothing and ran over to the kitchen sink and throw up

Sunny looking confused: whats wrong with you?

Park: I left, I had to ive no place in that world now, ive got nothing.

Sunny: I dont understand

Park: Im pregnant, no one wants a pregnant model, my agency found out & dropped me said I was starting to look old anyways, and with the pregnancy I might never find any work again.

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and that is the rather rushed conclusion to the story.

Now to start thinking about my next story, any suggestions?

[wamdue]

Park Lee is played by this woman

This post has been edited by wamdue: 16 December 2009 - 11:51 PM