This is a story set in the back end of 2010, it is told from the POV of Harry Ramsay as he tells the police how the death of Declan Napier caused his sister to spiral and attempt suicide.
This is a crossover story featuring Ali Bastian in her role as PC Sally Armstrong from The Bill. (no good reason, just because I can)
Part 1
Harry watched as his sister was wheeled out of the door by an ambulance crew, he wondered how they would get her down the steps to the drive where the ambulance had parked. He saw her pale face, and her body not motionless but in the back of his mind he could still her fitting, like she was when he had found her.
Until a few months ago his sister had been the strongest & happiest people he knew, her dance career was starting to take off, and she had found love, he has wished his life could run as smoothly as hers.
A police officer stood in front of Harry, blocking his view, it was a woman no more than 30, she had taken her hat off and to Harrys amazement was looking at him sympathetically, he didnt know the police were capable of that.
"Im Senior Constable Armstrong, but you can call me Sally if you wish" she said in an English accent, which suprised Harry "I know this is difficult, but can you tell me what happened to your sister, or why you think she would try to take her own life?"
Harry started to walk around her "Ive got to go with her, she needs me there?" he said distressed.
Sally Armstong moved to block his path, and smiled "what can you do that the paramedics cant do themselves?, why dont you sit down and tell me what happened, ill take you to the hospital when we are done" she gestured over to the sofa.
Harry found her presence calming, and sat down on the sofa, "where do you want me to start?" he asked as the Sally sat in the chair to his left. "From the beginning" she said
End of Part 1
Obviously this is just the framing of the story, and its based on my suggestion of storylines that could come out of Declans exit rather than continue with the same storyline but with a recast, if this is something you would like to read please say so.
Just for the record, the end credits would be.
Harry Ramsay - Will Moore
Kate Ramsay - Ashleigh Brewer
Declan Napier - James Sorensen
Senior Constable Sally Armstrong - Ali Bastian
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The near-death of Kate Ramsay (title maybe changed) Neighbours 2010 & The Bill
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Posted 31 January 2010 - 02:27 AM

SERIOUSLY NEIGHBOURS IS NOW ON A DIGITAL BACKWATER CHANNEL WHY HAS SUSAN BOWER NOT BEEN SACKED YET???!!!
#2
Posted 06 February 2010 - 04:57 PM
Nice idea, if only...
"This is just a bunch of houses side by side, but it's more than that. It's really special, and it's you guys that make it special. And gosh, I'm going to miss it."-Janelle Timmins, 5255 "But the best thing of all is that I have found a family bigger than I ever could have imagined."-Harold Bishop, 5635 "Nobody throws a party quite like Ramsay Street"-Jim Robinson, 1000 "Not a Timmins left on the street; it breaks my heart"-Harold Bishop, 5385
"The story of Ramsay Street is far from over."
"The story of Ramsay Street is far from over."
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#4
Posted 08 February 2010 - 09:01 AM
I really should, shouldnt I.
Cant go telling Susan Bower want to do, if I dont get around to doing it myself.
Cant go telling Susan Bower want to do, if I dont get around to doing it myself.

SERIOUSLY NEIGHBOURS IS NOW ON A DIGITAL BACKWATER CHANNEL WHY HAS SUSAN BOWER NOT BEEN SACKED YET???!!!
#5
Posted 17 February 2010 - 01:45 PM
AmyJay, on 07 February 2010 - 05:02 PM, said:
Not a massive fan of Kate then? Or do you think it should be a storyline?
Well, not particularly, but I meant that this would be better than
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"This is just a bunch of houses side by side, but it's more than that. It's really special, and it's you guys that make it special. And gosh, I'm going to miss it."-Janelle Timmins, 5255 "But the best thing of all is that I have found a family bigger than I ever could have imagined."-Harold Bishop, 5635 "Nobody throws a party quite like Ramsay Street"-Jim Robinson, 1000 "Not a Timmins left on the street; it breaks my heart"-Harold Bishop, 5385
"The story of Ramsay Street is far from over."
"The story of Ramsay Street is far from over."
Please visit my website: The Stories
#6
Posted 17 February 2010 - 05:09 PM
this not a dig at Kate, it is to show Bower the characters can move on from Declan.

SERIOUSLY NEIGHBOURS IS NOW ON A DIGITAL BACKWATER CHANNEL WHY HAS SUSAN BOWER NOT BEEN SACKED YET???!!!
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